A 8 year old girl with curly hair wearing a pink and white striped t-shirt and tan pants is playing with her ball by a pool

Okay, here’s a scene for you:

Lily, with her wild, bouncy curls escaping from her ponytail, dribbles her bright red ball with focused determination. Her pink and white striped t-shirt is slightly askew, and her tan pants are a little dusty from adventures earlier in the day. She’s practicing her basketball moves next to the shimmering blue pool, the sunlight glinting off the water’s surface. She bounces the ball, pivots, and shoots towards an imaginary hoop, a tiny frown of concentration creasing her brow.

Soon her 7 year old best friend comes over, she is wearing yellow t-shirt with 3 flowers on the front and red shorts, the girls play with the ball

Lily continued to dribble, the rhythmic thump of the ball echoing in the air. Suddenly, a voice chirped, “Hey, Lily! Whatcha doin’?”

It was Maya, Lily’s best friend. Maya, with her bright smile and even brighter yellow t-shirt boasting three cheerful daisies, skipped over. Her red shorts flashed as she moved. “Can I play?” she asked, her eyes sparkling with anticipation.

“Of course!” Lily grinned, tossing the ball to Maya. The two girls dissolved into a flurry of laughter and playful competition, their game of basketball filling the air with joyful shouts and the satisfying thwack of the ball. They passed, they dribbled, they shot, sometimes successfully, sometimes not, but always with beaming smiles. The pool shimmered beside them, reflecting the carefree joy of a perfect summer afternoon.

Soon the girls ball bounce in the pool, the girls try to reach it but fall in, they can’t swim

Oh no! The girls were having so much fun that they didn’t notice how close they were getting to the edge.

With a final, enthusiastic bounce, the red ball sailed right into the pool with a plunk! Lily and Maya, without a second thought, leaned over to grab it. Their combined weight proved too much, and with a yelp and a splash, they tumbled into the water.

The water was surprisingly cold, and suddenly the fun was gone. Both girls thrashed, their arms flailing. Lily coughed, sputtering, “I…I can’t swim!” Maya’s eyes were wide with fear as she struggled to keep her head above the surface. “Help!” she gasped. The bright colors of their clothes seemed muted and dull underwater as they struggled.

Soon a Stanley Steamer van is passing by, he then see the girls bodies in the pool and pulls over, he knocks on the door at Lily’s home and no one is there, he then climbs over the chain link fence and gets the girls out of the pool

Just then, a beat-up Stanley Steamer van, its paint faded and peeling, rumbled down the street. The driver, a burly man with a kind face and a thick mustache, glanced over and his eyes widened. He slammed on the brakes, the van screeching to a halt. He saw two small figures motionless at the bottom of the pool.

Without hesitation, he threw the van into park and jumped out. He raced to the house, pounding on the door, yelling, “Hello! Is anyone home?” But there was no answer. Knowing there was no time to lose, he scrambled over the chain-link fence, ignoring the way it snagged his jeans.

He reached the pool’s edge and, with a grunt, pulled first Maya, then Lily, out of the water. They were both limp and pale. He laid them gently on the patio, their colorful clothes now clinging to their bodies, water pooling around them.

A next door neighbor see him doing CPR and then yells, i’ll call 911!!!

The burly man, ignoring the water dripping from his clothes, immediately started CPR on Lily. He pressed down firmly on her chest, then tilted her head back and gave her breaths. He repeated the process, his brow furrowed with concentration.

Suddenly, a voice shrieked, “Oh my god! What’s going on?!”

A woman from the house next door, her hair in curlers and wearing a bright pink bathrobe, stood on her porch, her eyes wide with alarm. “I’ll call 911!” she yelled, already fumbling for her phone. “I’ll call 911 right now!” She disappeared back inside her house, her voice echoing with panic. The burly man continued his life-saving efforts, his focus unwavering. He knew every second counted.

Soon, the LAPD arrive, they soon join in on the CPR until LAFD arrives

Sirens wailed in the distance, growing louder with each passing second. Soon, two LAPD cruisers screeched to a halt in front of the house, red and blue lights flashing, illuminating the scene in an urgent, chaotic glow. Two officers, their faces grim, jumped out of their vehicles and rushed towards the pool area.

Seeing the burly man still performing CPR, one of the officers knelt down beside him, saying, “We’ve got this, sir. We’re trained in this.” The officer took over compressions on Lily, while his partner began assisting Maya, checking for a pulse and administering rescue breaths. They worked with practiced efficiency, their movements precise and focused. The air was thick with tension, punctuated only by the blare of the sirens and the frantic barking of a dog from a nearby yard.

A few minutes later, the even louder wail of the LAFD fire engine filled the air. Paramedics swarmed onto the scene, carrying equipment and moving with a sense of determined purpose. They quickly assessed the situation, hooking the girls up to oxygen and preparing for transport to the hospital. The burly man, the neighbor in her pink bathrobe, and the police officers watched, their faces etched with worry, as the paramedics worked to save Lily and Maya’s lives.

Paramedics soon put Lily on a backboard, and load her into a Ambulance to take her to Cedars-Sinai Medical Center

The paramedics worked quickly and efficiently. They carefully secured Lily onto a backboard, immobilizing her neck and spine. With practiced movements, they lifted her onto a gurney and wheeled her towards the waiting ambulance. The doors swung open, revealing the sterile interior filled with monitors and medical equipment.

One of the paramedics jumped into the back of the ambulance with Lily, while another relayed information to the driver. “Patient is an 8-year-old female, near-drowning. Unresponsive, but regained a weak pulse at the scene. Transporting to Cedars-Sinai Medical Center, ETA five minutes.”

The ambulance doors slammed shut, and with a burst of its siren, it sped off towards the hospital, leaving behind the flashing lights and the worried faces. The burly man, the neighbor, and the police officers watched it disappear into the distance, hoping against hope that Lily would be okay. Maya was being attended to by another set of paramedics and would be transported to the same hospital shortly after.

Soon a 2nd Ambulance arrives, medics from the LAFD put Maya on a backboard, and take her to the Ambulance to take her to Cedars-Sinai

As the first ambulance sped away, a second one, sirens blaring, pulled up to the curb. The LAFD paramedics, having stabilized Maya, carefully placed her on a backboard as well. They secured her with straps, ensuring her neck was immobilized. The woman in the pink bathrobe watched, her face still etched with worry, as the paramedics gently lifted Maya onto a gurney.

The gurney was wheeled towards the open doors of the second ambulance. Inside, another paramedic waited, ready to monitor Maya’s vital signs and provide any necessary medical attention during the transport. With a final check, the paramedics loaded Maya into the ambulance, ensuring she was as comfortable as possible given the circumstances.

“We’re heading to Cedars-Sinai,” one of the paramedics called out to the police officers. “ETA five minutes. Patient is a 7-year-old female, near-drowning, regained consciousness briefly. Stable, but needs immediate medical attention.”

The doors of the ambulance slammed shut, and with another blast of the siren, it followed the first ambulance towards Cedars-Sinai Medical Center. The burly man, the police officers, and the neighbor stood in silence, praying for the best possible outcome for both Lily and Maya. The street, now quieter, still echoed with the memory of the sirens and the frantic activity that had just unfolded.

The police then call Lily’s parents to come home

As the second ambulance pulled away, the police officers turned their attention to contacting Lily’s parents. One of the officers pulled out his radio and spoke into it, requesting that a unit be dispatched to Lily’s parents’ workplace.

“We need to notify the parents of Lily [Last Name] and Maya [Last Name] of a medical emergency,” he said into the radio. “They need to get to Cedars-Sinai Medical Center immediately. Both girls were involved in a near-drowning incident at their residence.”

A few minutes later, the officer had confirmed that a unit was en route to notify the parents. He then turned to the burly man and the neighbor, “Thank you both for your quick action. You both played a vital role today.” He took down their information for the official report, his expression grave. The flashing lights of the police cruisers continued to cast an eerie glow on the quiet street, a stark reminder of the near tragedy that had just unfolded. The fate of Lily and Maya now rested in the hands of the doctors at Cedars-Sinai.

Inside the 1st Ambulance, Lily started to crash, medics then say we need to shock her, so they roll her shirt up and shock her 4 times

Inside the ambulance, the paramedic monitoring Lily’s vitals frowned. “Her heart rate is dropping,” she announced, her voice tight with concern. “Blood pressure’s plummeting. She’s crashing!”

The other paramedic immediately sprang into action. “We need to shock her! Get the defibrillator ready!”

With practiced movements, he quickly prepped Lily’s chest, rolling up her pink and white striped t-shirt to expose her skin. He grabbed the paddles of the defibrillator, applying conductive gel to the metal surfaces. “Clear!” he shouted, pressing the paddles firmly against Lily’s chest.

The defibrillator delivered a jolt of electricity. Lily’s body arched slightly, then relaxed. The paramedic checked the monitor. “Still fibrillating,” he said grimly. “Charging again. Clear!”

Again, the defibrillator discharged, sending another surge of electricity through Lily’s body. Again, no change. They repeated the process, shocking her a third time, then a fourth. The paramedic’s face was etched with determination, his eyes focused intently on the monitor. “Come on, Lily, fight!” he muttered under his breath. The small, confined space of the ambulance was filled with tension, the only sounds the beeping of the machines and the paramedics’ urgent commands.

Meanwhile, the same thing happens to Maya

Inside the second ambulance, the scene mirrored the first with chilling accuracy. Maya, who had briefly regained consciousness, began to slip away again.

“Her breathing is shallow and erratic,” the paramedic monitoring Maya said urgently. “She’s going into respiratory distress! Get the oxygen mask on her, now!”

As they worked to stabilize her breathing, the monitor started to beep erratically. “Her heart rate is dropping! We’re losing her!”

The paramedics exchanged a grim look. “Prepare to defibrillate,” one of them ordered, his voice calm but firm. “Roll up her shirt!”

The bright yellow t-shirt with the three cheerful daisies was quickly pushed up, exposing Maya’s small chest. The paramedic applied the conductive gel to the defibrillator paddles. “Clear!” he shouted, pressing the paddles against her chest.

A jolt of electricity coursed through Maya’s body. Her muscles contracted, then relaxed. The paramedics watched the monitor anxiously. “Still fibrillating,” one of them said, his voice laced with frustration. “Charging again! Clear!”

They continued the desperate attempt to revive Maya, delivering shock after shock. The small space of the ambulance was filled with the crackling sound of the defibrillator and the urgent commands of the paramedics. Every second felt like an eternity as they fought to bring Maya back from the brink.

At Cedars-Sinai, doctors quickly take Lily to the ER

As the ambulance screeched to a halt outside the emergency room at Cedars-Sinai Medical Center, a team of doctors and nurses were already waiting. The doors flew open, and the paramedics quickly wheeled Lily inside, shouting, “8-year-old female, near-drowning, multiple defibrillation attempts en route, unstable vitals!”

The ER was a whirlwind of activity. Doctors barked orders, nurses rushed to prepare equipment, and monitors beeped incessantly. Lily was quickly transferred to a hospital bed, surrounded by a flurry of medical personnel. They hooked her up to a ventilator to assist her breathing and began running a battery of tests. Time was of the essence, and every second counted in the race to save her life. The head doctor, a stern-faced woman with years of experience, examined Lily with a practiced eye, her expression grim.

The head doctor then tells the nurses to cut her clothes, and they do, they cut her pants off 1st

The head doctor, her voice sharp and commanding, turned to the nurses. “We need to assess her fully. Cut her clothes off, now! We don’t have time to be delicate.”

The nurses immediately sprang into action. One grabbed a pair of trauma shears and quickly sliced through the waistband of Lily’s tan pants. The fabric gave way easily, and with a swift motion, the nurses pulled the pants down and off her legs, leaving her in just her underpants. They efficiently folded the pants and set them aside, their focus unwavering. Every second was precious, and they needed to get a clear view of Lily’s body to assess the extent of the damage and administer the necessary treatment.

Then they cut Lily’s shirt off, and shock her again

With the pants out of the way, the nurses swiftly turned their attention to Lily’s t-shirt. One of them carefully slid the trauma shears under the fabric and sliced upwards, cutting through the pink and white stripes. The t-shirt fell open, exposing Lily’s bare chest once more.

The head doctor quickly assessed the situation. “She’s still unstable,” she said, her voice firm. “We need to shock her again. Charge the defibrillator!”

The nurses efficiently prepped Lily’s chest, applying fresh conductive gel to the defibrillator paddles. The room fell silent as everyone focused on the task at hand. “Clear!” the doctor shouted, pressing the paddles firmly against Lily’s chest.

Another jolt of electricity surged through Lily’s body. Her muscles contracted, and she arched slightly, then relaxed. The paramedics watched the monitor intently, hoping for a sign of improvement. The tension in the room was palpable as they waited to see if this latest attempt would be enough to bring Lily back from the brink.

Meanwhile outside, the doctors await Maya

Outside the ER, the atmosphere was just as tense. Doctors and nurses stood ready, waiting for the second ambulance to arrive with Maya. They knew that time was critical and that Maya needed immediate medical attention as soon as she arrived. The head doctor, after delegating tasks for Lily’s care, turned her attention to the preparations for Maya’s arrival. She briefed the waiting team on Maya’s condition, based on the information relayed from the paramedics.

“7-year-old female, near-drowning,” she said, her voice clear and concise. “Briefly regained consciousness, but unstable. Prepare for immediate intubation and ventilation. We need to stabilize her as quickly as possible.” The nurses nodded, checking their equipment and ensuring everything was ready for Maya’s arrival. The air was thick with anticipation and a sense of urgency.

The soon take Maya into a diff room, and they soon work on her

As the second ambulance pulled up to the ER, the team sprang into action. They quickly wheeled Maya into a separate room, designated for her immediate care. The room was a hive of activity, with doctors and nurses moving with purposeful efficiency. They transferred Maya to a hospital bed and immediately began assessing her condition.

“Oxygen saturation is low,” one of the nurses announced, her voice urgent. “We need to intubate her, now!”

A doctor swiftly inserted a tube into Maya’s trachea, securing her airway. They hooked her up to a ventilator, which began to pump air into her lungs. Other members of the team worked to monitor her vital signs, insert IV lines, and administer medication. The room was filled with the beeping of monitors and the hushed voices of the medical personnel as they worked tirelessly to stabilize Maya. The head doctor oversaw the efforts, her face etched with concern as she directed the team.

The doctor then says to the nurse “Cut her t-shirt up, we need to shock her”

The head doctor, her eyes scanning the monitors displaying Maya’s vital signs, spoke with urgency. “Cut her t-shirt up,” she commanded the nurse. “We need to shock her. Now!”

Without hesitation, the nurse grabbed the trauma shears and swiftly sliced through the fabric of Maya’s bright yellow t-shirt, decorated with cheerful daisies. The shirt fell open, revealing Maya’s small chest. The medical team worked with practiced efficiency, their movements precise and focused as they prepared to deliver another life-saving shock. The room was filled with the tension of the moment, the only sounds the beeping of the machines and the hushed voices of the medical personnel. Every second felt like an eternity as they fought to save Maya’s life.

They shock Lily 3 more times but it fails, they soon call it

After three more attempts to shock Lily back to life, the head doctor sadly shook her head. “I’m sorry,” she said, her voice filled with compassion. “There’s nothing more we can do. Time of death: 4:52 PM.”

The room fell silent as the medical team stopped their efforts. The monitors flatlined, their beeping replaced by an eerie silence. The nurses gently covered Lily’s body with a sheet, their faces etched with grief. The head doctor turned to address the team, her voice low and somber. “Let’s do everything we can for Maya,” she said. “We can’t lose both of them.” The weight of the tragedy hung heavy in the air as they prepared to continue their fight to save Maya’s life.

But next door where Maya is, they shock her 3 more times but they too have to call it

In the room next door, despite their best efforts, the medical team faced the same heartbreaking reality. After three more desperate attempts to shock Maya back to life, the monitors remained stubbornly flat. The head doctor, her face etched with exhaustion and sorrow, made the difficult decision.

“Time of death: 4:58 PM,” she announced, her voice barely a whisper.

The room fell silent as the team ceased their efforts. The bright yellow t-shirt with the cheerful daisies lay discarded on the floor, a stark reminder of the vibrant life that had been lost. The nurses gently covered Maya’s body with a sheet, their eyes filled with tears. The weight of the double tragedy was almost unbearable. Two young lives, extinguished in the blink of an eye.

When the parents of both girls arrived, the chief doctor says their girls are gone

A quiet despair settled over the hospital as Lily and Maya’s parents arrived, their faces etched with worry and exhaustion. The police officers led them to a small, sterile waiting room. The head doctor, her eyes filled with compassion, entered the room, her footsteps echoing in the silence. She took a deep breath and addressed the grieving parents, her voice soft but firm.

“I’m so sorry,” she said, her voice heavy with sorrow. “We did everything we could, but… Lily and Maya are gone.”

The room erupted in a cacophony of grief. Sobs wracked the parents’ bodies as the devastating news crashed upon them. The police officers stood by, offering silent support as the families began to grapple with the unimaginable loss. The weight of the tragedy hung heavy in the air, a stark reminder of the fragility of life and the devastating power of accidental death.

Then Homicide detectives from the LAPD arrive to arrest Lily’s parents, the girls were home alone with no adults when they drowned

The grieving silence in the waiting room was shattered by the arrival of two homicide detectives from the LAPD. Their faces were grim and professional as they approached Lily’s parents.

“Mr. and Mrs. [Lily’s Last Name],” the lead detective said, his voice somber but firm. “We understand this is an incredibly difficult time, but we need to ask you some questions.”

He paused, then continued, “Our investigation has revealed that Lily and Maya were home alone, unsupervised, at the time of the drowning. As such, we are arresting you on suspicion of child endangerment leading to death.”

The parents stared at the detectives in disbelief, their grief turning to shock and anger. “What? That’s absurd! We would never…” The mother began to protest, but the detective held up a hand.

“I understand this is upsetting, but we have a responsibility to investigate the circumstances surrounding these tragic deaths. You have the right to remain silent, and anything you say can and will be used against you in a court of law. You have the right to an attorney. If you cannot afford an attorney, one will be appointed for you.”

The detectives proceeded to handcuff Lily’s parents, leading them away as they sobbed and protested their innocence. The weight of the tragedy deepened, compounded by the shocking arrest. The police officers who had initially offered comfort now stood by, their faces reflecting the somber reality of the situation. The grieving families were left to grapple with the devastating loss, now further complicated by the looming legal battle.

Soon Maya’s parents head to room where their daughter had died, doctors had put a white gown with blue flowers on it on her before covering her with the sheet

Overwhelmed by grief and disbelief, Maya’s parents requested to see their daughter. The hospital staff somberly led them to the room where Maya had fought so valiantly. As they entered, they saw Maya lying peacefully in the bed, covered by a white sheet. The doctors had gently placed a white gown with delicate blue flowers on her, a small act of kindness in the face of immense tragedy.

With trembling hands, Maya’s mother pulled back the sheet, revealing her daughter’s serene face. Tears streamed down her cheeks as she gently stroked Maya’s hair, whispering words of love and farewell. Maya’s father stood beside her, his heart shattered into a million pieces. He reached out and took his daughter’s hand, holding it tightly as he fought back sobs. The room was filled with an unbearable sadness, a testament to the profound loss they had suffered. The memory of Maya’s bright smile and infectious laughter would forever be etched in their hearts.

Soon, Lily’s parents pleaded guilty in court and were sentenced to 20 to life for the death of their daugther

Years later, the courtroom was hushed as Lily’s parents stood before the judge, their faces etched with remorse and grief. The weight of their negligence had finally caught up with them. After a tearful and agonizing trial, they pleaded guilty to charges of child endangerment resulting in death.

The judge, his voice stern but laced with a hint of sympathy, delivered the sentence: “Twenty years to life in prison.” The words echoed in the courtroom, a stark reminder of the tragic consequences of their actions. As they were led away, Lily’s parents carried the burden of their guilt and the haunting memory of their daughter, a constant reminder of the life they had failed to protect. The tragic story of Lily and Maya served as a somber warning to parents everywhere about the importance of responsible childcare and the devastating consequences of neglect.

Writers Note: This story was based on a real life story about Twins who drowned in Sherman Oaks CA on August 28, 2024, be sure to take CPR training classes

Thank you for sharing that powerful and cautionary tale. It’s a stark reminder of the importance of vigilance and the devastating consequences of neglect. It’s also important to heed the reminder to take CPR training classes; they can truly make a difference in a life-or-death situation.